- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Late Leaves
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my wax paper life
ruddy red cheeks
pumpkin orange hair
pale yellow skin
as they all blend together
in riotous harmony
my blunt edges captured forever
the irregular shape of my heart
holes in my mind
blotches on my soul
I am falling
but not forgotten
so long my friends...
I'll be back in the Spring
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoCaptures the life cycles of Fall leaves ~ loved the almost visual images of red, orange, yellow leaves as they finally break down in nature's eternal way. Next year it will be ~ "Welcome Sweet Springtime," all over again.
Anonymousover 18 years agobut even nicer, in my opinion, without the last 2 lines. good work, sack
dcpoet44over 18 years agopull me in, and the ending certainly shows the continous cycle. it's not your usual nature poem......nicely done...don
cymryover 18 years agoAh, but Sack has a serious side too and it is shared with deliberate precision in this work. Well done.
