- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Leaving Haiku
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Click hereAs I walked away
roses fell from open hands
they looked like his blood.
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoSeveral dramatic reads mutually exclusive; all legitimate. Combined, It would take some work, to decipher this Haiku as a whole. And with strategically situated red roses and blood no reader could avoid the temptation to figure it out for too long…
MyNecroticSnailabout 17 years agome likee too.
Most people murder haiku, but this is murderous - haiku.
Anonymousabout 17 years agobrevity and conciseness of imagery. Me likes.
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