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Click here"Please don't judge the nature in with this poem begins its only based on a true experience"
I have known you for most of my life never putting my guard down in fear always staying faraway but still you gave me so much strength I believed in you
Everybody is looking for that something and you'll find it in the strangest places and I found it in my best friend and tonight I gave into her spell
I touch her but my hands are so sweaty I'm scared to breath I read between the lines and I know what she needs but I don't know what to do I can't move my body is under her spell
I feel that special heat between us I feel her hands moving down my body my heart is beating so fast in waiting of her next move I know I need her so badly
I guide her hand down my leg and I kiss her like its my last kiss and time stops as she kisses me back our tongs meet our breasts meeting for there first touch as our body's move together
Finally I feel hole and I whisper "I love you" for the first time since I fell inlove with her it feels so right but so wrong
Your fingers finally caressing my deepest my nails digging into her back as my moans escape between our lips heats of passion come and go
Mornings arrives and the son kisses the dawn a good morning as I reach for you but all I find is an empty beside my heart drops for some reason I just know she's gone and a tear creeps down my cheek as the words but I love you sneaks from my heart
It has great potential.
A few typos to clean up, of which one was extremely comical in a good way.
' Finally I feel hole '
You can't be blessed with a more appropriate typo.
The lines need to be broken up for an easier read. As is, they read like long winded sentences.
' I touch her
but my hands are so sweaty
I'm scared to breath(e) '
See? Easier to read.
' I touch her but - my hands are so sweaty - I'm scared to breath(e) '
See? Another comical moment in your favor. These things are easier to notice when lines are broken up.
Keep at it.