Let me!

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She was your great love
through lifetimes
heartache after star-crossed
heartache woven
among magic
moments

too fleeting

too deep
to breathe

drowning
and glad of it

You are my great love.

Let me be your great joy!
this lifetime
orgasm after Divinely-ordained
orgasm woven
among magick
poems

let me captivate
and inspire
let me infuse your desire

let me try
to return you your smile

let me be your comfort
let my arms feel like home
let my smile warm your heart
let me gift you great love

lasting
joyous love

let me!


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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 16 years agoAuthor
Maybe that's what happens

When you fall in love for the first time. Your poetry sucks but your heart has wings and other cliches. sorry I dissappointed you.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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sorry SL, a parade of cliches - star-crossed, magic moments, magick?, let me..., let me....

hippiedudehippiedudeover 16 years ago
these lines

too fleeting

too deep

to breathe

were my favs -

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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My first impulse is to cringe when I see too much heartache, or crossed stars, or joy, but this poem reads very nicely. When you put it all together, it works. Even for me. I didn't cringe. :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
mention

this poem was mentioned in the new poem reviews (~_~)

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