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Click hereShe was your great love
through lifetimes
heartache after star-crossed
heartache woven
among magic
moments
too fleeting
too deep
to breathe
drowning
and glad of it
You are my great love.
Let me be your great joy!
this lifetime
orgasm after Divinely-ordained
orgasm woven
among magick
poems
let me captivate
and inspire
let me infuse your desire
let me try
to return you your smile
let me be your comfort
let my arms feel like home
let my smile warm your heart
let me gift you great love
lasting
joyous love
let me!
When you fall in love for the first time. Your poetry sucks but your heart has wings and other cliches. sorry I dissappointed you.
sorry SL, a parade of cliches - star-crossed, magic moments, magick?, let me..., let me....
My first impulse is to cringe when I see too much heartache, or crossed stars, or joy, but this poem reads very nicely. When you put it all together, it works. Even for me. I didn't cringe. :)