- Erotic Poetry
- Let Me
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Let me be in your arms tonight,
laying close to you
Let me look into your eyes
and slowly drink you in
Let me slide my hands tenderly
where they want to go
Let me feel your hardness
growing in my hand
Let me guide you into me
making us complete
Let me love you forever
my friend, my lover, my love.
- COMMENTS
James Kirklandalmost 20 years agoThe previous comment on this poem is wrong. The repetition strengthens and re-inforces the emotion of the poem. His/Her alternative loses the effect, weakens the poem. Good work...
Rybkaover 20 years agoThe repetitiveness Of your title weakens your poem IMHO. You might begin to think along the lines of something like:
"Let me . . .
Be in your arms tonight,
laying close to you
Look into your eyes
and slowly drink you in
Let me. . .
Slide my hands tenderly
where they want to go
Feel your hardness
growing in my hand
Let me . . .
guide you into me
making us complete
Let me love you forever
my friend, my lover, my love."
Just a suggestion on how you might alter the words for impact.
