- Erotic Poetry
- Let the Tide Wash Over Me
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Click hereI lie on the beach.
It’s moonlight, I wait
Wait for the tide
I need it, I ache for it
Breathless I wait
The first waves reach my toes
Bubbles fizz up to my ankles
I smile, anticipation rising
The waves creep up, slowly at first
Rhythmatic… back and forth, back and forth
Heavy and full now, more frantic
The water splashes over my navel,
I’m enveloped, lost in a sea of sensation
… back and forth, back and forth
My nipples stand in the moonlight
I feel the surf bubbles flicker over them
It starts.
Warm pulses race along my inner thighs
I gasp needing an intake of breath
The waves are forceful now splashing over my face
I succumb, engulfed in passion.
The orgasm burns, my lips throb
The waves recede
I glisten in the moonlight, wet, fulfilled
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoEnjoy this piece
Just a couple minor editorial suggestions
If I may be so bold ~
Change the first moonlight to moonlit, drop a couple of the I's, and make the last line of the first two strophs more similar.
See what you think...
I lie on the beach.
It’s moonlit, I wait
Wait for the tide
Need it, ache for it
Breathless I wait
The first waves reach my toes
Bubbles fizz up to my ankles
I smile, anticipation rising
The waves creep up, slowly at first
Rhythmatic… back and forth, back and forth
Heavy and full now, more frantic
The water splashes over my navel,
I’m enveloped, lost in a sea of
sensation… back and forth, back and forth
Like I said, just a suggestion...
My Erotic Trailover 17 years agoI enjoyed your poem as much as I enjoy being engulfed by the surf. (~_~)
