Letting Go

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lil_fire
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The time has come
For letting go.
Though hard it seems
For you to know.

The time that has brought
The pain of letting go.
The clouds are thick
The wounds are deep.

The shadow's that cast
The world so bleak.
To take a breath
And let yourself weep.

The time has come
To move on.
Though hard it may seem
I am not alone.
To walk a mile high
With you by my side.

lil_fire
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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
It's hard....

...to express emotions in short sound bytes like this. Longer, freer lines would bring more feeling to your work. The emotion is there, now make us feel it too.

You're improving all the time.

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