- Erotic Poetry
- Liar
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As lovers we're lying
On the cold hard floor
"Yes!", you were thinking
I begged you "No more"
You grabbed and you groped
Your panting all I could hear
What you saw was arousal
What I felt was fear
Taking what you wanted
No eye for my hurt
"Just enjoy this, baby"
Making me feel like dirt
We're no longer lying
you can't tear me apart
I lie to myself now
And cheat on my heart
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agoIt’s an incredibly evocative and powerful piece of writing, it’s very well written and full of emotion. If this is real and it happened to you then please know that people do care. We probably live thousands of miles apart or you could live somewhere close either way I care and I know others will too.
Tess (UK)
Bradp1974about 7 years agoI'm questioning how I wanted to rate this. It is a wonderfully written piece; the emotions are right up front. It feels, to me, that you went through, and are still having, a trying time.
As I said, a very well written piece.
tazz317about 7 years ago"Layers" and then check the nest, TK U MLJ LV NV
TheInnerBeastabout 7 years agoI like it! A great start for you first submission to Literotica. Love them redheads. Do keep going!
