- Erotic Poetry
- Lie soft and waiting...
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Click hereLie soft and waiting on your spread velvet sheet,
Your venus furs shaven, your breasts sleeping
On your longing body like a dreaming babe,
Your writhing slowly...in that way to you do,
That impatient glance, where all the sea's sirens
Are seduced and devoured...
Eyes amber and singing,
Singing like my visions,
Lovers on a lone stretched beach,
That I have seen from afar so often
In passing time...
And in the meanwhile,
Bite those ruby luscious lips,
And give me your best preying look,
Tear me apart, do what I plead,
I won't feel or see a thing...
- COMMENTS
Epmd607almost 15 years agoafter 'Breasts sleeping' it's not bad, just flat. Your (...) are unnecessary, it's something poets fall into now and then, but ... usually take away from a poem because you have to stop and think about why they're there when a comma, semi-colon, or period would work. Keep writing, maybe come see what poets are up to on the message board.
