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Click hereThe girls are sentimental
but squeamish of thorns
of impalement
in general
i am a target for boys
BB guns and slingshots
take down the weakest of things
and leave it lie
move on
move on
I plead to the girls
to touch me
redeem me
take me out
of the familiar
I am worth a nickle
everyone is worth at least a nickle
This is Gods law
when you are fragile
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Of the two, this is far more developed, it has more depth. Love the images. Once you start rolling with them, you are right on target.
Your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry forum. Wonderful, wonderful poem.