- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Life II
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A banquet
Of
Waxed fruit
And
Synthetic flowers
Breath deep
The
Carrion sweet stench
Bite deep
The
Sawdust dinner
Choke hard
On
Your lies
Fade away
A t-shirt
Washed
One time
To
Many
Dance
For me
Oblivious
To the strings
- COMMENTS
Rybkaover 20 years agoIn my view this is the best of the work that you have posted so far. Only the second stanza seems inappropriate. I don't understand the smell of "carrion" between
"Waxed fruit
And
Synthetic flowers"
and
"The
Sawdust dinner"
By the way,
"To
Many"
needs another "o". :)
Icingsugarover 20 years agoI like this alot. It's compact, and more precise than it looks at first clange. A great addition to the Lit poetry roster.
