tagErotic Poetrylife is a private party

life is a private party

bySenna Jawa©

no tv
first time
in this bar
and in
the mirror
a young woman
good looking sharp cheerful
black pants black blouse
a guard
she guards
a walk-in closet
in the wall behind me

this might be my only time
in this bar which caught my eye
in the past months
a bar that belongs
to oriental movies
which mix kung fu with money

the coming visitors don't enter
the huge dark room on my right
for which i didn't care myself
i meet enough drunkards

the oh so elegant guests vanish
in the closet
the young woman
frisks them
armpits inner thighs ankles

some New Saigon it seems
and on my way
out i ask
it's a private party
she says

but of course

Wlodzimierz Holsztynski ©

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