Lifespan

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On a cold and lonesome point of time
Sit all my words in ancient rhyme
Within a solitary cell
All my thoughts take form and gel
My mind rolls on in noiseless space
Through a vacuum in a lighted place
Remove my love, my only breath
And I am planted firm in death

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
This is so sweet.

Very nicely, simply stated. I love it.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Very good...

so often when using couplets the rhyme overtakes the poem, detracting from the overall effort, however, here you have a very unobtrusive rhyme, that works well with the poem. Some excellent rhyme pairs made this an enjoyable read. A life in some rhythm and rhyme, very good...

jim : )

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
A lot

of meaning and emotion in so few words

Very Nice

Thank you

Tathagata

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