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Click hereOn a cold and lonesome point of time
Sit all my words in ancient rhyme
Within a solitary cell
All my thoughts take form and gel
My mind rolls on in noiseless space
Through a vacuum in a lighted place
Remove my love, my only breath
And I am planted firm in death
so often when using couplets the rhyme overtakes the poem, detracting from the overall effort, however, here you have a very unobtrusive rhyme, that works well with the poem. Some excellent rhyme pairs made this an enjoyable read. A life in some rhythm and rhyme, very good...
jim : )