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Click herefierce,thousands
of close strikes
hot knives slicing
syrupy summer rain
in dense black sky
clinging to back steps
for the blazing blue
rush of it, peaking
at the dark thrill
my breath slows
I go back inside
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Liarover 19 years agoI like your style.
Just wanted to say that. You have a unique and very interresting way with words and poetry form. Looking forward to read more from you.
Tathagataover 19 years agoI like
the thunder...not so much the lightening.
I loved this:
~hot knives slicing
syrupy summer rain~
Great words
Thank you
