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Lay here in the half light that lingers
until darkness sweeps us away,
brushing life to vague forest shapes,
plume and angle. Lay here where time
drops from the sky like fading memory
shades our repose to solace.

There is no need for meaning.
We have departed with the shadows.
We are one life stilled, statuary, carved
feature by feature wrought together.
Your hand drapes my hip, our knees curl
tandem, your lips part my veiled nape.

Peace enters the inlet of dreamtime.
The breeze of distant rain sings,
the highway barely whooshes, like ashes
of origin blown past our senses,
our laments, so only the sussuration
of breath quivers here, everywhere silent.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Here's a nice piece from a year ago;

so soothingly sensuous...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Another gem

...from Eleanora Day. She uses onomatopoeia to great effect in the last verse. The whole is a delightful read.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Gorgeous...

...and aching. Some great lines...."there is no need for meaning"...."the breeze of distant rain sings".....and many others. Lovely!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
simply

beautiful.

This is a soul at peace

and it's wonderful to see and read

Thank you

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