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This is silver bliss.
Churchbells ringing
morning. Snowdrops
falling perfect lace,
blending into blankets.
Mounted, pillowed
like the plump of lips
awaiting kiss.

Purity.

Your eyes open.
Your eyes smile.
Who can fathom sky?
Oceans do not justify
the tides, but simply
ebb, flow. Your eyes
smile and never
ask me why.

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
calm beauty

and winter time love.

wonderful

thank you

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Sparkling simplicity

Like how you start with the hardness of the silver and progress to the softness....lovely..

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
wonderfabulous~

poeticly smooth, painted a mental picture .<smile>

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I read this early this morning

and didn't have time to comment. It's perfect. You need to gather up all your poems and... oh, I don't know... put them in a book? :)

ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
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You are getting better all the time!

Thank you for the most enjoyable read.

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