- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Lines from a Foolish Male Poet
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Click hereLines from a Foolish Male Poet,
Praising a Female Poet's Excellent Lines
You wear your talent like your beauty—simply,
unadorned, as it needs no adornment—for its true
worth is in form and elegance and fine subtlety.
Your phrasing is exact and reflects your cool
intelligence and mastery of verse. "Cool" not as cold,
as your theme is often warm. I mean controlled,
or careful, fitted more like dovetail than glove.
It's your craftsmanship, not retail, that I love
about your words. You build but do not sell
your poems. Their surface glows with polish
that refines their sturdiness, shows off how well,
how solid they are made. My only, impure, wish
when I read them, blessed by your grace and style,
is that I read them in your arms, kissing you the while.
- COMMENTS
lostandfounderover 17 years agoThis poem has a better erotic undertone than a great many of those found in the erotic category. Great work.
duddle146over 17 years agoClever come-on. Will there be a sequel? Unabashed sweet praise ~ well deserved.
Sinamynleeover 17 years agoShe's one lucky lady, that's for sure. Even though you're writing about her "writing," you get so lost in the praise, that one can only sit and imagine how you would write about her if you would have used something less tangible to describe her... the words create such thoughts of love, it's simply beautiful.
