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Click hereI wonder if I fill my mouth with you
and try to speak it'll be
jibberish
or junk
or just plain bad manners?
Or perhaps joy?
The j slipping out one corner of
my open lips and the y out the other.
Or what if I suck liquid love words from you
and can't swallow them all,
will they splash and spill and spell fuck
across your belly?
I wonder if you'll like that?
Wowza...
What a thought to have.
Think I need to try that one.
*Big Grins*
Wonderfully Hot imagery here...
More Plez~!!
...the answer is a loud, heart pounding, pelvic thrusting yes.
I give you an "A" for originality. The line breaks don't really bother me, but you could have restructured the poem to have fewer lines...it might be worthwhile to experiment.
That we can consume and drink in the flow of sensuality until it spills over the edge. Nicely put!
That would be a loud, groaning yes!
Nice mix of the ingenuous with the obscene- very effective erotica. Still consider your line breaking, though; the end of a line is prime real estate.