- Erotic Poetry
- Lithesome
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Click hereBack arched
One day we met,
When I touch you..
Wanting,
Sense my surrender to you...
A hand to feel, a hand to touch
You may taste
you are a beauty's angel pure and clear.
An orchestra beats in my heart
Mind blowing
So many miles apart we are
It is your song
Down beneath the sheets I sink
Talk with me and share my laughter,
And then, you let me explore,
Sleeping comfort
You reach me deeply
Enchanting
Awaken me
Into me
Surrender
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 18 years agoA bit different perhaps, no harm in that;
Just a small suggestion with:
"Back arched
One day we met,
When I touch you..
Wanting,
Sense my surrender to you...
A hand to feel, a hand to touch"
Just seems ellipses are misplaced; see what you think about this:
"Back arched
One day we met,
When I touch you
Wanting...
Sense my surrender
A hand to feel, a hand to touch"
