Little bit of a love poem

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todski28
todski28
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Do you remember when our love
was reckless?
thunderstorms in tinder grass
it blew on a gale
passion screamed raw
unedited poetry, full of mess and wordiness
each kiss mashed teeth to lips
a blur of copper tang and taste
the scent of musk,
the husky way you begged to be taken

now, we are the rain of autumn
that quenches summers thirst
light, gentle
we pour like syrup drizzled
indulgence in familiarity
a favourite meal
the smudged pages of a favourite book
sipped like berry cider
smile at silent directions
that lead to nirvana

where sex isn't just about copulation
but where we are one
I can touch you on the inside
you can feel my caress
we know each others crests and peaks

I hold you tight
as the shivers subside
trace your curves with
finger tips soft as petals
I don't need to say
I love you
but
trace it on your spine
whisper it anyway.

todski28
todski28
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avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlover 7 years ago
Often...

I come back to read this. It's rare and beautiful in a raw and honest way that is truly both romantic and prime erotica.

~ABG💋

todski28todski28almost 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you all

To erects

Something about this piece was bugging me for a while and I couldn't nail it down, I think you may have found it, thank you for the input!!

erectus123erectus123almost 9 years ago
Terriff as usual

I would say you have two poems here. I'd edit to a stop after the word cider, fix the next line and end there. These are the strongest part of the poem and the most universal. The rest is more personal and pleasant but the first part is the heart of the matter. But of course what do I know? Carry on Aussie!

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredalmost 9 years ago
Romantic and sensual...

I love it...not just a little bit...but a lot.

avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlalmost 9 years ago
This...

This is very sweet and gracefully moving. You have done a very nice job here.

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