- Non-Erotic Poetry
- little jade dolls
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little jade dolls
sepia ringlets and piercing windows
offer the comfort of beautiful fields
tender palms that rest on knees
seduce in lovely lazy circles
twinkling sapphires catch your attention
along with nodding auburn tresses
smiles meet and kisses greet
the welcoming warmth of a friend
swimming in the delicious aroma
of those beckoning little jade dolls
the tantalizing whispers heard
from beryl winks and mossy walls
this sea of frantic waving forests
dance within the kaleidoscopic bowl
that reflects the voyages and sings the stories
of cloudy mirrors and sage waterfalls
dashing through luscious languid meadows
filled with intoxicating apples and limes
the dandelions, snapdragons, lillies and orchids
make love with the oregano and thyme
prancing and skipping over the hills
among the swallows and butterflies
watching the slideshows of other's tales
while munching on bits of spinach pie
content with intrigue and olives, too
the stars appear to light our way
basking in the moonlight of peacock hues
i thank you for helping me end my day
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 19 years agothat has meadows of apples and limes?
A small suggestion, avoid the extra space between the lines, makes it difficult to read. (at least for me)
I don't understand this, well maybe I do
"the dandelions, snapdragons, lillies and orchids
make love with the oregano and thyme"
On to the good stuff:
smiles meet and kisses greet
nice line internal rhyme, not overdone elsewhere
This really has a nice feel and flow to it, nice combinations of words.
Sounds like a picnic, I wish it was a little clearer, but then I can be dense
Shows alot of promise.
(I wish I was there)
