Livid Seas

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The lies and threats of the inept
the ‘Holy Ones’ who laid the bait
His Holiness got hold of us
apocalypse still lays in wait
Humanity’s catastrophe
so sad to see what we create
False Trinities in vivid dreams
the wizardry creating fate
Hypocrisy for all to see
theocracies creating hate
Indecency in secrecy
the reverie of human waste
We’ve given these divinities
validity to pave the way

The livid seas still reign supreme
one look and you can see it
Pure agony was given me
one Earth one Hell, so be it

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A softly cloaked

Yet telling critque...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow!

Powerful rant - shouldn't it be Livid See? A D manages to wrap all the wrongs of organized religion into an eloquent package.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
best of both

livid seas... the yin and yang rise to mind, nice write (~_~)