living bodies

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pile allowed
to sweat, move to music
rake to silence making only
objection to pain unwelcome

all flavors
in all light, all camera brand
clicking squint
pairing, relieving

flash through slats
the shade of rattan and vinyl
across lover’s skin
time versus light, rake

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annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
salamasond

this brought to mind Rodin's "Gates of Hell"

and it is just as hot.

Like in Yertle the Turtle, I do not want to be all the way at the bottom.

and quit giving yourself zeros goof ball

svelte walkersvelte walkerabout 20 years agoAuthor
pile?

it was meant to mean pile of warm living,

bodies not at rest

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
is "pile" leaves?

Fantastic strophe:

"flash through slats

the shade of rattan and vinyl

across lover?s skin

time versus light, rake"

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