Living the Shooting Star

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Du Lac
Du Lac
15 Followers

A marvelous mysterious streaking night skies
children scream and point
lovers close their eyes and wish

Elders see their life while others see their destiny
cosmic dust bunnies amongst glittering black
Living the shooting star

Floating and timeless traveling through space
close to heaven and far from hell
a soul peacefully floating on the milky way

Power held in love barely touched
skies filled with reminders of rapture
twinkling stars capturing universal truth

Burning bright touching lives from afar
a thousand wishes dance along the night winds
kissed by the stars joy

All too soon the light fades
a solid mass lost amongst the Nova wreakage
destined for unknown fate

Existing and eternal one moment believed
touched by atmospheric tongues
bursting into the cleansing flames

Time grabs the tail riding the comets blaze
shooting and startling across the pure night sky
Wish my children as the burden of life fades

To know once love is worth the pain
Tomorrow will come regardless the struggle
Face the night skies filled with the rapture

Breathless the streak of fire and light
Forever remember this shooting star night
Burnt out in seconds a piece of my soul.

Du Lac
Du Lac
15 Followers
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
A Piece of My Soul

Indeed. Very powerful stuff.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I just realised....

...I forgot the therm. Rumour has it only the 1st one counts - if that's true I'm sorry but rest assured I gave you a 5.

Tess the Thermophobe.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
*****

"cosmic dust bunnies" - I love it! Well done Du!

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
several images

Floating and timeless traveling through space

close to heaven and far from hell

a soul peacefully floating on the milky way

in this gives the reader a nice sigh...great pen...bluerains

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Starstruck~

Wonderful imagery Du~!!!

I love your writing.

It always makes me reach deep inside and pull out the best I have to offer.

Your writing is excellent~!!

I love the form, imagery, flow.

You make it seamless... brilliant~!!!

Muchh much more plezzz

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