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I fit you perfectly
your key,
slide in
deep,
tumblers turn
latches unclasp
I hit the spots,
you release
every time
I pop your
lock
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Tsothaalmost 10 years agoAgreed, good metaphor. However, for an erotic poem, I feel that timing / padding / length / building anticipation is an important component. This is too short to really hit that goal, I think... Damn. Erotic poems are difficult.
