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bytodski28©

I fit you perfectly
your key,
slide in
deep,
tumblers turn
latches unclasp

I hit the spots,
you release
every time
I pop your
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by Tsotha04/28/14

Agreed, good metaphor. However, for an erotic poem, I feel that timing / padding / length / building anticipation is an important component. This is too short to really hit that goal, I think... Damn.more...

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