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Lollie

bytodski28©

Lollie, say it slowly
two strokes of tongue
on teeth,

unwrapping
your plain packaging
tasting that little bud
tingles tantalizes
teases my mouth so,

small nibble, no biting
want to let it dissolve
so I can experience
the joy of every last
swirl,
a treat in the core
as it explodes
the juice so sweet,
a delicacy I cant help
but consume slowly

lollie dissolved on my tongue
yum

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by Trixareforkids05/28/14

What fun

~grabs Blow Pop~ yum indeed.

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