- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Lone Moon
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One lone 'howl'
at the moon's glow
a wolf in the night
remembers its love.
Soft paws pounding
running over the soil
guided by the light
of moon rings coiled
in its illumination
brightly lit springs
a distant howling wolf
in the blue, sings
mournful memories
of yesterday
gazing at the stars
recalling frolicking days
in tune with the moon
the wolf's insight
expressing feelings
howling at the moon bright
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44over 18 years agoSoft paws pounding
running over the soil
guided by the light
of moon rings coiled
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i'm thinking that *pounding* would be better to possibly say, "strike softly" and it will a more natural effect with nature. overall a nice piece art.......don
Anonymousover 18 years agowhatever happened to nwwolf I wonder...I think by leading him to this site...he found the pack of howlin females...nice pen...
LeBrozover 18 years agoAt mournful memories
the old wolf howls,
while young join in
paying respectful homage.
Would have looked great illustrated with a wolf howling at the moon high overhead.
sackover 18 years agothrows off the rhythm a bit. Read this aloud and that is more evident. I also would seek to eliminate the two "its" if you can...otherwise quite vivid, I liked the imagery.
