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sadness nourishes,
like a garden hose.
roots grow, choking sprouts
of joy,
(satisfied longings
trying to find their way
past hollow eyes.)
sunbeam morning
can not thaw numb limbs
from frost of evening, years
in frozen tundra.
wind
blows a cold chill, artic ice
in brazen darkness.
with eyes closed,
she can not see
the new horizon,
where companionship rises
to dance
with restless soul,
making merry
what lived a winter's death.
she settles in, adjusts
her pillow,
tucked in safely
like a sleeping child,
as isolation kisses
goodnight.
she falls asleep
with solitude,
her faithful lover.
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this poem is so filled with longing..I wish I could come and snuggle you for one evening we could laugh and tell story poems by the fire :)
that gentle soul in you that will make a wonderful poet.
You are getting better every time
: )
Don't stop
Thank you fawnie
...beautiful. My only critcism - if that's what it is - is the use of the word "hose" - it jars a bit. Maybe "showers" or "rain".
Well done fernie, tara's right.
...impress more and more all the time. A strong statement here!