loneliness

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fawnie
fawnie
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~~~~~~
sadness nourishes,
like a garden hose.
roots grow, choking sprouts
of joy,
(satisfied longings
trying to find their way
past hollow eyes.)

sunbeam morning
can not thaw numb limbs
from frost of evening, years
in frozen tundra.
wind
blows a cold chill, artic ice
in brazen darkness.

with eyes closed,
she can not see
the new horizon,
where companionship rises
to dance
with restless soul,
making merry
what lived a winter's death.

she settles in, adjusts
her pillow,
tucked in safely
like a sleeping child,
as isolation kisses
goodnight.

she falls asleep
with solitude,
her faithful lover.
~~~~~~

fawnie
fawnie
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sharp

image fawnie, very sad. Well done.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
ohhhh

this poem is so filled with longing..I wish I could come and snuggle you for one evening we could laugh and tell story poems by the fire :)

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
you have

that gentle soul in you that will make a wonderful poet.

You are getting better every time

: )

Don't stop

Thank you fawnie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sad and......

...beautiful. My only critcism - if that's what it is - is the use of the word "hose" - it jars a bit. Maybe "showers" or "rain".

Well done fernie, tara's right.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
You...

...impress more and more all the time. A strong statement here!

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