Long Distance Lover

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cavu182
cavu182
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Friday morning
cup of tea
thinking what
I want to be,
when I’m grown-up
when I’m old
underline? italic? bold?

And you’re out there
In a rush to town
North Metro train
half smile, half frown,
Hurdy gurdy
hustle, bustle
a mix of subtle
and outright muscle,

You text me when
you’re at your desk
tell me I’m
the very best,
While arranging a date
with Frank (or Fred?)
reminding me
that you’re not dead,

So my friend
long-distance lover
what is it that
we discover,
I get old
and you advanced
your short skirt
my Carhartt pants,

We’ll meet next week
down by the coast
beach house cabin
weenie roast,
A mix of sex
wine and beer
two strangers in
the fun house mirror,

So I return
to my prose
count my fingers
count my toes,
Stoke the fire
with last-year’s wood
what would I be
if I could?

A New York dandy
a Wall Street shaman
Village poet
or Tutankhamun,
Your full-time lover
or subway friend
I text this poem
and tap send …

cavu182
cavu182
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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Really well done

The poem was really well crafted and, as another carhartt wearing long distance lover, the content was perfect.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
you have great controll

in your writing the poem seems to bounce along at a nice pace, instils the portent of desire and a little apprehension with the final lines.

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