Longing

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Somehow, every time that i start over and keep on looking,
Things get harder, fences get higher
I require proof and persistence
If I am caught, does the hunter know what to do with me?
The chase is easy, taming is the challenge
Where are the walls and how far can I go on my tether?
Does he care enough to haul me in,
Are there consequences or indifference if I wander off course?
How do I know who I belong to, whose feet I kneel before?

Show me, take me, teach me
To bide your will,
Train me to respond to your hand
Teach me how to please you
Let me lay my head upon your knee
for my reward.

I crave the hand in my hair,
dragging my head back for your kiss
or holding me on my knees while my mouth
services your cock.

I crave the knee in my back,
holding me bent over the bed while your belt
makes patterns on my ass
painting a picture with my whimpers
leaving proof of your taking, your ownership.

I need to be taken,
hard and at your will,
make me beg for you
make me crawl
ride me till I scream and beg for mercy
make me cum till I have nothing left and then take more.
Take my self-control, break it
Make me yours, make me cry
Let me lay my head upon your knee
Your hand on my hair, caressing
Is he only reason that I need.

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bluebellbluebellalmost 15 years ago
I felt this one too, perhaps slightly lower down

Were you crawling around inside my head? ;) Very well-captured, the spirit of that sort of relationship; the power, the boundaries, the pleasure. I enjoyed this very much and your first stanza was excellent. This was mentioned along with I Wish in the poetry forum (repeating myself here, heh) if you want to stop by. Thank you for sharing!