Longing to break her off.

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Best friends fuck better
Your tight pussy needs to be filled

Tell me not to stop
Bit first tell me
You don't want me to start.
Please say no to me.

Better yet say nothing but more more more.
Obedience makes good poppets.
Blow me off first, then blow blow blow.

Beg for completion and I'll withhold.
Scream into my hand over your mouth.
Or into a pillow.

Show me your favorite objects.
Expect them inside of you.
Share with me the sweetest taboo.

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CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Liking

I liked it.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IS HE TRYING TO CONVINCE SOMEONE ELSE

or himself to do or not to do, TK U MLJ LV NV

Mo_B_DickMo_B_Dickover 11 years ago
@ Anon

Don't tell me, show me...I agree with you on that.

Thanks.

Mo_B_DickMo_B_Dickover 11 years ago
Back to the drawing board. Thanks you guys.

I'm going to spend some more time in the forum section, and keep learning.

I admit that story was an impulse.

Honesty and suggestions always appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
tell and show

This piece is too obvious, as if a Dominant's stream of consciousness is not restrained You tell too much and show too little. This makes this piece un-erotic.

Maybe, try again?