Look Into My Eyes, My Love

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Look into my eyes, my love
Tell me that you care
Do you like what’s in between your lips
Can you feel my heartbeat there?

Can you feel my pulse increasing
As your tongue caresses me
Can you see the excitement in my eyes
As you suckle me tenderly?

I wonder what is in your thoughts
As you gaze so eagerly
Is your oral pleasure satisfied
In your act of pleasing me?

The pleasure that you’re giving me
As your mouth does its wondrous feat
Makes me writhe in euphoric ecstasy
My masculinity complete

Will you take the gift I can’t suppress
That soon you’ll feel explode
And will my pleasure be yours as well
As you swallow my copious load?

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Mmmmmm... I kind of loved this poem..

It certainly adds to the pleasure of both when you keep eye contact..

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Another one of your pieces with such excellent imagery. But I must admit to being disappointed at the ending, "copious load." It sounds so self-aggrandizing. I'd suggest creamy but that sounds like such a cliché.