- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Looking For You
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No this isn’t a song
And it means nothing
This is just a small little voice
Which hides in a dark corner
And murmurs your name
At an equally dark hour
- COMMENTS
Tzaraalmost 18 years agoI liked this.
"Small little" seems redundant. I'd ditch one, probably "little".
jthserraalmost 18 years agoI wondered if you might want to consider dropping one of the modifiers when you say "...small little voice". It seemed to flow better if you dropped a syllable there, saying either "...tiny voice" or simply "...little voice", otherwise a tight little poem. Nice work.
jim : )
