Looking in the mirror

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Looking in the mirror trying to see what I see
Looking in the mirror trying to see who is me
Here I look and I like what I see
Wondering why no one sees the inner worth of me

I look at others and I just don't understand
what the difference is that makes her choose them over me
I know that I'm not the most perfect young man
But I know if they'd look they would be surpised by what they'd see

What I believe and what makes me who I am
seems to be breaking down with each passing day
I try and hold on to the hope inside me
but its tough when no one seems to see the things that I see

I want someone I love to see the good inside me
but she doesn't see the love and the good that I see
She compares me to others and I know I can't compete
but I know if she looks she'll know I am complete

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