loquat theives

Poem Info
243 words
0
2.2k
0
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
lobomao
lobomao
6 Followers

I imagine your private sanctuary
An enclosed bit of earth and stone
Concrete poured between them
Fruit trees along the walls…
In sunlight light you can lay
Just in just out of sight
From a prying world
Except those thieving squirrels
As they hunt and chase and play
Taking dusky loquats from your tree
Getting drunk on rich sunny juice.

We could watch them there
As we lay full in midsummer warmth
So hot that clothes had been shed
Left behind inside where it’s cool.
My hand with ice from a pitcher
Of real southern lemonade
Runs dreamily down your side
Sending shivers in stark silver daylight
As eager hands and clever tongues
Trade secrets back and forth

Oh sweet sanctuary,
Air spiced with the heavy smells
Of your full ripe fruit
As it waits eager for a hungry mouth
To enwrap, entwine, engulf it
To tease the juice from tender skin
In summer passion drink it down
For high vaulted arches
For deep velvet shrines
We can explore our wonders
And still not see it all

I’d lay with you in that day
Till my body was burnt bright blue
And play as we lay side by side by side
Your body sticky with soursweet sweat
And tarty taste of loquats
We stole back from squirrels
As we chased each other
In our own crafty ways
These delicious moments
Ripend like fruit in your yard
We chose to steal away together

lobomao
lobomao
6 Followers
Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
this sounds

like moments of filled with the kind of memories I would have remembered...tis nice to have such to look back upon...tis a blessing...wonderful insightful look into the pages of your past..ty...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
~

"For high vaulted arches

For deep velvet shrines"

you have a reputation (with me at least) for your soundplay-- well not play-- hmmm for using thhe repetition of sounds in your poetry. Sometimes it goes too far, but in this poem, it works Just Right. I mean look at those two lines!!!

This poem made me thirsty.

The title is perfect.

~aswirls

Share this Poem