- Erotic Poetry
- Losing the submissive
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Be true, be honest
Be loyal, devoted
Give your heart
Show your mind
Bare your soul
They tell you
You get the same in return
It’s a lie, no truth
All you get is tears
And I know this is true
So why do I keep seeking
Searching
Hoping
Knowing it will never be…
Why do I open those doors
Why do I trust
And honestly hand myself over
Only to be discarded again
Wandering
In search of that safe place
Just someone who understands
Someone who knows how to ease this feeling
The search leaves me exposed
Easy prey for those who feed on what I am
Each time a piece to the puzzle that is me gets lost
No other choice
But to close the door and lock it
And slip silently back into the shadows…
The only safe place I know.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoKajira - very honest portrayal Thank you for sharing Sambarrow614
~hellbaby~over 19 years agoYour words reflect a feeling I know all too well. It always sounds too depressing when I attempt to put it in writing though, you've managed to make it be OK and not pitiful.Thanks!
TheRiddleralmost 20 years agowhy your comments always leave me feeling like an autumn breeze...you know the ones...they come just before the winter...that last gasp of air that rushes over the hillsides and strips the trees of their remaining leaves.
There is something missing in you KC...I am not sure just what it is but I hope you find it...before it is too late!
Victoria_2001_02769almost 20 years agoAah ~ Cara Mia...
the chord in me that only you know how to touch. You reached in and plucked it tenderly, but with that deep sense of strong emotion. In each piece of you that you "lose" ~ I find an answering piece in me.
I weep for what this means to you... your words, so deep, so poignant, yet true. The present feeling of sadness... the deep sense of loss that is felt... for that which could not be... is, indeed, touched upon... but you take your feelings up and hold them to you ~ as you retreat to the darkness... that which is your "safe place" to you...
Bellisima, Cara ~ bellisima!
sybilrosealmost 20 years agoBut you are good at expressing it.
Give it time to heal
