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I was lost in space
yesterdays tomorrow
thoughts were
brutally borrowed
there was no time to think
tornado words with out a warning
silently calling
to 'damn' many mental pot holes
on a gray matter interstate
while running flat footed as a crow
standing
over an open man hole
but I saw the light
of darkness
in a sign

there it wasn't
flying like a sitting rock
yelling nothing at all
like a black and white souls worth
as if it were an edition
the futures news paper
reading me

well just ask me!
I know,
I don't know
with all that I know
that I know
'wanker-doodle nothing
about what I don't know
other than
what I really know
which is what you want to know
is there anything worth
knowing to know
or am I
lost?


you know what I mean?


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(I found the muse at RF's 'one word' "lost" that took more than one word to get lost in, on a muse night)

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Ya know ... I love it ~

I had so much fun that night writing poems

and bouncing with you. This poem, was a riot

to read, and crazy ... just like us eh~

Thank you for the mention,

... you are a Sweetie Pie~

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
I AGREE.. WOW !!! s

something must of set

you a fire !

what use of metaphor you

have going here,

reminds me of ,

one bright day,

in the middle of the night...

....and so I am off to the

rest, if as good as this ?

I will need a chain

to smoke , LOL..

-sGp-

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
imagery nice -

but this line kicks ass:

to 'damn' many mental pot holes

***

that feels something like i would write.....don

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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What a different style and so creative too. Your muse sure was tickling your fancy on this.

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
engrossing

nice structure & flow ~ great imagery