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Click hereWords of love ripped apart, a soul lies dead and cold, dreams are scattered to the wind, never to unfold.
The storm shall rage as the soul lies still, lost to the world of love, cold fingers grip the dreams gone by, as the soul is lost to the kill.
Only one weeps, the soul that lies, as passion escapes the grasp, love is lost and closing his eyes the soul will never sleep.
but it could use some editing, IMO. Have you thought about breaking the lines some?
(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)
I thought you said you didn't do the whole poetry thing? ;) Nice work man.