- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Lost in Time
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Click hereThe old white tattered one
with torn lace and faded letters on
the cover where it used to say
"Peace and Joy on your Wedding Day" ~
that is where she keeps inside
memories of a blushing bride;
pictures of a boy and girl
who once thought love would change the world.
Now the mirror she looks upon
makes her wonder where time has gone;
what happened to the youthful fire
that fueled a burning desire
to make the world stop and listen?
Is it gone or simply missing
a spark to set it again ablaze;
or a new frontier to graze?
From time to time she wonders
as she wanders lost in time.
- COMMENTS
Senna Jawaabout 20 years agoYour poem is one cliche after another.
Write about specific events, specific scenes, which you, yourself have experienced. Write simply and in your own words. Then you can't fail to sound original. Good luck.
jthserraabout 20 years agosome images here, images that say so much. You are showing me some things here, not just telling me.
jim :)
Anonymousabout 20 years agoI like this poem. It has more depth than your little "throw-away" efforts - altho' I like them too. :-)
