Lost Opportunity

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/14/2021
Created 06/09/2012
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demure101
demure101
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The old field had been ploughed and sown
with maize, but by some error
there remained a grassy lane that ran
halfway the field; a smaller one
branched off. But for its entrance
all of it was hidden by a wall
of green with brownish speckles
frothing with red plumes. I walked
up there and squatted down
inside the field.

An open place, walled in, well-screened
seemed waiting to be used
for playing in. But no small boys
dressed up like Indians ever cast
appraising looks at this green fort,
and when I heard someone approaching
I made off, I hope, unseen
- you just don't squat in fields -
but what a pity such a place
should be waiting there unused -
If only I were younger,
or to play such games
not solely the prerogative of boys.

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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Relieve yourself, He or She

on the ground or on a tree

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Youth, they say...

...is wasted on the young! Just think what sweet joys us older folk could find in a forgotten and deserted field such as this! :)

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE FARMER PLOWS HIS FIELD

and plants the crops in order, TK U MLJ LV NV