Love

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Your arms are the haven I run to when I am overwhelmed.
Your voice is the sweet serenity I crave when life is chaotic.
Your smile is the joy I want in my life.
Your eyes are the love I need in my heart.

How could I have been so blind?
How could I have not seen how much you meant to me?
How could I have been so desperately searching for what was right there in front of me?

Eternally grateful that you waited, patiently.
Eternally grateful that you were still there when the veil lifted from my eyes, from my heart.

I love you.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Finally...

she realizes that her true love was there, almost in front of her all the time.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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It starts off weak and gets much stronger as you develop this piece. Best thing to do is to cut that first strophe in half; by that I mean, cut each sentence off, leaving the first half in place.