Love as Plain Geometry

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—for my lovely Arowhena

Here intersect our lives
how disjoint planes align,
crossed from horizon to horizon
yet simply, as a line.

And when I tell you now
my love is infinite,
it’s also one-dimensional.
That’s all I will commit.


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unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
impressive

a fine use of form, and tightly controlled while being nicely sentimental. I liked this a great deal.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Really good and your poem is mentioned on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread.