- Erotic Poetry
- Love Haiku desu
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Click hereWe start love in Spring
Our Summer is wet with sweat
You leave me, I Fall
- COMMENTS
zammalmost 7 years agoMegu, this is excellent. First, I feel your disappointment and pain. The sense of longing and memory for things past. Second, your clever use of the seasons and the double meaning in Fall. Really clever. I will have to read more. Thank you. Arigato gozaimasu
champagne1982almost 17 years agowell presented progress through the other 3 seasons. I don't know much about haiku, but it seems, almost, as if you had to force the words into conformity. Maybe try to write a conventional poem on your topic, it could be more satisfying to you as the poet.
