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Love Story


I’ll love you sweet,
if you love me sweet back.
It’s a pretty dance on top—fizz-pop.
This veil covers other places.
Love’s bliss is a deeper blue.
Don’t stop in the fire warmth
of yellow and orange—
the center dissipates through,
freezing to nothing, everything.
It burns so hot it’s stone cold,
where history unwinds
and dissolves itself.

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