- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Lover's From Another Time
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An image flashes in my mind
With every beat of my heart
A beautiful vision that shall never fade
A fantastic scene where we both take part.
I close my eyes and feel the warmth
The gentle caress of skin on skin
And I get lost in the sweet sensation
Remembering how we must have been.
Once lovers from another time
When I promised you my soul
A vow shared of undying love
For without you, I am not whole.
For far too long we've been apart
Since those glorious days of old
When true love meant more than words
Left on display for all to behold.
Finally we have found each other
Beyond the realms of death and life
To share again what we once had
Our hearts and souls, my love, my wife.
- COMMENTS
Rybkaover 20 years agoEnigma, Your rhyme scheme is strong, but your metre falters at times. This poem's topic is a well used theme, and difficult to do in a fresh way. It needs (IMHO) to be reworked a bit if you want it to be enjoyed by an audience much wider than the one it was written for.
