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Click hereBodies Leaning in
Lips brushing momentarily
Hands embracing faces
Pulses quickening
Breaths heating skin
Noses rubbing slowly
Sighs betraying desire
Tongues moistening their imprisoning lips
A final inhaling before
Mouths meeting
Lovers kissing
You are telling me about the kiss, not showing it to me.
It is like describing a painting and not allowing anyone
to "feel" the art, all you have then is a list of objects in
the painting.
"A woman
sitting down
dressed in black
smiling"
Is this the same as the Mona Lisa?
Make me "feel" something with your poem!
Keep writing! >?)))><