Love's Disgrace; Play by Play

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Shiver in sin,
With hope for a smile,
Whilst I'm coming in,
You'll scream for a while,
You're against the wall,
I'm finding my place
No order as tall
As true love's disgrace

With reason to sigh,
And reason to moan,
Our love gets me high,
My cock is your throne,
And you are the queen;
The queen of my heart,
All's just as it seems,
Now tear me apart

Lascivious thunder,
Passion in rain,
Your treasure - my plunder,
Your pleasure; your pain,
I'm finding my place,
I'm coming behind,
As true love's disgrace
Is painted in rhyme

Cover my heart in your shameful desire
Your love is an ocean, our sex is on fire.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
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I would not take much advice from someone who doesn't know when to use "your" and "you're"

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Mmmmmmmm well done :)

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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your meter is out for most of the poem if your going to rhyme read it out loud to yourself to hear where it's out of sync

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