- Erotic Poetry
- love's liquifaction
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Click herelove's liquifaction
at passions peak
rivers of white lava
churn below the surface
eyes lock, kneel at the alter of love
longing gaze detonates desire
vessels pulse, magma surges
eyes show no hesitation
only a yearning to embrace
the expression of fervor
about to rain down
glistening magma leaps
from its undulating source
translucent white rope
loops through the space
suspended momentarily
fluid shape reflected in your gaze
becomes an abstraction of love
face lights up as the streaming passion
first touches skin
another eruption shakes my body
and pearly ribbons dance over your face
the fire that you lit in me
now races across the contours of your countenance
i watch in ecstasy as my glowing nectar
mingles with your exquisite beauty
you wantonly embrace my showering love
ravenous for passion's milky expression
your tongue glides over your lips
and disappears into your mouth
my salty flavor offers proof
to another of your senses
that you have brought me through
oceans of orgasm
as I heave in convulsing pleasure
gravity pulls the oozing ribbons
your finger lifts juicy dangling pearls
to shimmering lips that envelop and consume
your gorgeous face glistens with
aqueous pathways connecting
my desire and your beauty
your face twinkles like a dewy morning dawn
and your wanton smile shines
- COMMENTS
Maria2394about 13 years agogoing on in here. I think it could be pared down, but I do like the comparison to the orgasm and the magma. You have a lot of good phrases in this work. Good imagination that could be formed better in time. Give it a while, let it sit, then go back and read it aloud and listen to what it is telling you about itself. You will know what it needs when the time is right. :) I enjoyed the read.
~ maria
