Love's Monster

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bayoujuju
bayoujuju
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If i could have known
what the sacrifice
of loving you cost,
I would not have paid it

I gave you my strength
and my heart freely
You returned them back
misused, torn and faded.


I came to find out
I was an easy fuck
and a bank account
that kept your needs sated.

It was not enough,
these sins committed
to please and keep you,
a monster love created.

bayoujuju
bayoujuju
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jthserrajthserraabout 14 years ago
Ah, very good...

I liked the rhyme of the last lines, subtle enough that I didn't catch it until I reached the end of the poem... I liked that, especially the near rhyme of "paid it". Again, a seemingly simple poem with a definite sting.

Well done.

jth