- Non-Erotic Poetry
- LoveSick
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Click hereFeelin' so lonely,
Oh if only you knew,
Just how quickly my thoughts have flown,
To serene thoughts of me and you.
What ever happened to,
the days when my thoughts were clear,
and the days when I held no one dear?
My heart's in overdrive,
Oh how can I survive,
These thoughts of me and you?
Sometimes I hate you.
All the time I love you.
Can't you see what you've done to me?
Can't wait 'til I am free...
Free to love you or let love be...
- COMMENTS
Belegonover 18 years ago"Sometimes I hate you.
All the time I love you."
I certainly feel that right now... a good first effort plaster.some lines seem a little forced and the flow might be something you can work on but the most important thing to me is to convey the feeling and you have done that.
